Untitled fan fiction
This is a fan fiction i started writing during class one day:
[the scene opens up with Jamie holding a dead rat and Reese walks in and sees Jamie]
Reese: (gasps) This is the moment I've been waiting for!
[a little while later you see Dewey playing piano and Jamie is sitting on the kitchen table with his dead rat. Reese meanwhile is standing a bit farther back from the table examining how Jamie looks when Lois walks in]
Lois: Reese what are you doing?
Reese: Training Jamie to be a star...
Lois: You're out of your mind. (Takes Jamie)
Reese: No! You can't just take him from me. I loved that rat!
Lois: Yes I can and I will.
Reese: (takes the rat from Jamie) [Jamie starts crying]
Lois: Oh for heavens sake.
(Malcolm walks in)
Malcolm: (to camera) So, Reese has been on this I have to find the right moment and I'll have my inspiration for my life thing. We still have no clue what he's talking about. (turn back onto the scene) What's going on here? (Looks from Reese to Jamie)
.....to be continued.....
could you please give me some feedback on this thanx
Dewey: Are you really gonna put up a formation of flying zombies
Hal: No I just drew them because they looked cool.